Ryosen
Hueco Mundo Lord/Arrancar Army Leader
Posts : 220
Points : 319
Join date : 2009-09-14
Age : 30
Location : Earth
 |  Subject: Re: Ryuu Takeshi - Angelus Orbis Terrarum - Vaizard application  Mon Oct 12, 2009 7:44 am | |
| Two things.
Add written appearance, at least 3-4 sentences.
One of your shikai abilities is that no one can sense your presence unless you are 2 meters away from that person. It sounds wrong, please change that. | |
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Ryosen
Hueco Mundo Lord/Arrancar Army Leader
Posts : 220
Points : 319
Join date : 2009-09-14
Age : 30
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Ryuu Takeshi - Angelus Orbis Terrarum - Vaizard application Mon Oct 12, 2009 8:27 am | |
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